Aw, okay xD See, I'm hoping to shift from a writer to some sort of odd artist/writer hybrid, but all I have are two carpy mice :/ Well, I'll just have to submit and get a tablet ^^ Again, great picture. Very cute, as well as your design~
Wow...That is dull, boring shading...Are you WANTING to make it look like a cheap, shitty low budget anime...Get better at art before you start to teach it. Also, self insert OCs are bad and you are bad for having one and flaunting it so much.
You sir are an ass, looked at your gallery it is meh, hers is better. MLP is all about OC ponies they even sell blank toys for you to customize. Oh I see your a 4chan person, never mind your assness is now explained.
That... looks pretty awesome, but unfortunately it is of no help to me. Still trying to grasp the basics, I wouldn't make it from step 1 to step 2 without several hours and lots of references. Oh, and also the pen tool to smooth out my lines because I don't have a steady hand.